working on story

havent updated in a while, excuse moi.
its just now that i feel that i gotten my art on the right track i need to work more on
my weakest area, story.
ive been revising the overall story quite a bit, added and subtracted elements
and now im trying to put everything together in a coherent way and minimize plotholes.
dialog writing needs alot of work too.
will try to churn out some pages next week.

PS. anyone know some slavers that sell cheap ghostwriters, let me know